My wallet has this hole in between.
whenever i put a coin in it ...it just falls down through that hole.
it has happened so many times that i dont even keep coins in my wallet anymore.
..
My wallet looks big and fat from the outside...JUST LIKE ME :)
but its empty inside...JUST LIKE ME :)
..
everymorning i wake up,brush my teeth,shave and all those things that make me a human being.
i then look at myself in the mirror...but i dont see myself..i see an empty wallet.
just as empty as yesterday.
..
I got to college.I see all these small kids with fat wallets laughing and enjoying their lives.
somethings are so easy when u have a fat wallet.
..
seeing them i remember the time i had a fat wallet.
i used to be happy.
but one fine day i realized that all the notes in my wallet were FAKE!
a wallet full of fake notes!
..
i threw all of them every single fake note, fake emotions!
all i have now is a wallet with a hole.
all i am now is a wallet with a hole.
u tell me something it falls down through the hole.
u say "hi" that 'hi' falls down right through the hole.
thats all i am thats all ill be.
A SOUL WITH A HOLE
whenever i put a coin in it ...it just falls down through that hole.
it has happened so many times that i dont even keep coins in my wallet anymore.
..
My wallet looks big and fat from the outside...JUST LIKE ME :)
but its empty inside...JUST LIKE ME :)
..
everymorning i wake up,brush my teeth,shave and all those things that make me a human being.
i then look at myself in the mirror...but i dont see myself..i see an empty wallet.
just as empty as yesterday.
..
I got to college.I see all these small kids with fat wallets laughing and enjoying their lives.
somethings are so easy when u have a fat wallet.
..
seeing them i remember the time i had a fat wallet.
i used to be happy.
but one fine day i realized that all the notes in my wallet were FAKE!
a wallet full of fake notes!
..
i threw all of them every single fake note, fake emotions!
all i have now is a wallet with a hole.
all i am now is a wallet with a hole.
u tell me something it falls down through the hole.
u say "hi" that 'hi' falls down right through the hole.
thats all i am thats all ill be.
A SOUL WITH A HOLE
13 comments:
Deep thought, Nik.. Good work!! :)
thanks sri :) i needed that :)
hey its too good... kina reminds me of the polo add.. the mint with the hole :P !! deep thoughts indeed !!
thanks boo :) gladchu liked it :P
Maybe if you fix that hole in your wallet... those coins won't fall out i.e. the little joys of life will remain with you... and over a time your wallet will become into a fat one... and if you count them ... they will be like many joys that you have experienced rather than a few major ones that u see others having...
LOL and also you can exchange those coins for a bigger note ... food for thought!!!:)
i had written the happy ending version of this one where the person meets somone special enuf for the hole to be fixed!..but i like the sad ending better...
and true that he can exchange coins {feelings} for a bigger note {exchanging feelings} but he isnt doin it because he has no idea if the opposite person has a real note or a fake one...is he gonna be trustworthy or not!
Nice Ya Nikhil :P I Liked It .I Nevr Knew Dat u R Good At It .Keep It Up .
Shweta Here !!
thanks shweta :) m glachu liked it
Nice....i hope there is no more hole in ur wallet...if there is..get it fixed...itz not to live wit a hole forever... :D nicely put up..!!!
thanks...but dont u think its better to be someone straight forward and blunt rather than being fake..?
Very deep...you are very talented...please write more poems like this...
this is a poem too...a non rhyming prose-like poem
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